Reading stories by emerging writers, unknown writers, struggling writers, and widely regarded authors is a delight. Most recently, I was gratified to judge the St. Louis Writers Guild Short Story Contest. A few days ago, I listened to the six winners (three honorable mentions) read their work. I was surprised to learn that one […]
Reading stories by emerging writers, unknown writers, struggling writers, and widely regarded authors is a delight. Most recently, I was gratified to judge the St. Louis Writers Guild Short Story Contest. A few days ago, I listened to the six winners (three honorable mentions) read their work. I was surprised to learn that one of the winners was a young man barely out of high school or into college, one was a lady who had never entered a contest before, and one was a lady who read her work beautifully.
Gems in a stack of manuscripts are rare. Let’s face it. Entries inducing the onset of headache are frequent. But writers coaxing their work into a new dimension through reading are the rarest of all. All writers are told how important reading aloud is. Writers are rarely taught how to read aloud well. In writing conferences I have attended, writers are encouraged to read, and “readings” are always an integral part of the program. In workshops, writers whose works are about to be discussed often are asked to read a passage first. But I have yet to attend, or hear of, a writing conference or workshop where reading is taught or work-shopped as a parallel craft.
Big name authors who come to town, or sign up as workshop faculty, usually read well. I don’t know if it’s because they read the same passage and get better at it by repetition, or their agents or publishers make them practice.
But I digress. For several years, I volunteered to review story collections for an on-line publication called The Short Review. The collections came from the English speaking countries around the world. Most of the time, only one or two stories were memorable in any way. But glimpsing what writers are trying to get from the inside to the outside is always fascinating to me. Even more, comparing what is being done on the “emerging,” “struggling,” and local/regional stages to what gets published and widely circulated through the usual national and international outlets (The New Yorker, The New York Times, The Atlantic, the better known literary journals, and most recently the story apps delivering stories to your computer or device) is instructive.
What shocks me is the ratio of what is memorable or worth reading again or saving for another time to read again is about the same – sadly, very, very low. I guess the moral is a perfectly publishable story from a pro, or bubbling through the literary cognescenti, may be no more worth reading than an imperfect one ripped from the pen of an “amateur.” Past acceptances are no guarantee of future enjoyment. Perfecting a story for publication may take all the fun out of it.
I write short stories (even had a few published). I read short stories. I critique short story collections (for the The Short Review, www.theshortreview.com). I imagine several dozen if not close to a hundred pass my eyes each year.
“Another Manhattan” by Donald Antrim is one of the best short stories published in the last […]
I write short stories (even had a few published). I read short stories. I critique short story collections (for the The Short Review, www.theshortreview.com). I imagine several dozen if not close to a hundred pass my eyes each year.
“Another Manhattan” by Donald Antrim is one of the best short stories published in the last five years. I would say “ever” but I don’t want to be one of those “instant classic” types. Saying almost anything about this story would be saying too much unless you’ve read it. So I will only repeat here what I wrote to the author on his Facebook page:
“Every time I read it, I feel those characters vibrating on a Richter scale of their own undoing. ” I should have added, from the opening sentence.
Of course, take my bias into consideration. Look at the photo on the home page of this blog. Unequivocally, I am a miserable failure at trying to think of myself as an ex-New Yorker. Still, this story could only be set in Manhattan. And if you’ve ever spent time there, lived there, or dreamed of there, I think you’ll know what I’m talking about.
I’d like to avoid a one-way opinion piece on the story. I would like to “talk” about the story with others. It was published in The New Yorker (December 22 & 29, 2008). Read it (http://www.newyorker.com/fiction/features/2008/12/22/081222fi_fiction_antrim) and, if you don’t mind, come back and let me know. If you’ve read it, blog away!
This guy is worth your time.
There’s a tremendous amount of fiction out there to read. And the Internet has increased the number of outlets for publishing by an order of magnitude. One of these days I should count average out how many short stories I read a week. I write reviews of story collections for The Short Review (www.theshortreview.com), I […]
There’s a tremendous amount of fiction out there to read. And the Internet has increased the number of outlets for publishing by an order of magnitude. One of these days I should count average out how many short stories I read a week. I write reviews of story collections for The Short Review (www.theshortreview.com), I am active at Zoetrope, an on-line work-shopping site, I read stories each week from two local writers groups, and now from my new friends from the 2009 Sewanee Writers Conference. Then there are the “published” stories I read in The New Yorker, Narrative, the Atlantic, and several other pubs.
Oddly enough, one of the best stories I ever read from a fellow “amateur” fiction writer was the one that followed mine in my first publication credit, Rainbow Curve (Issue 5, 2004), www.rainbowcurve.com . Matt Getty was the author. I’ve since been looking for and reading his stuff. The other day, I picked up a collection at the bookstore, Best of the Web 2009, or something like that, and I was sitting at a park bench taking a break from my bike ride here in the city of St. Louis and what do you know? Matt had a story in there! I had read the story at one of the on-line journals a while ago. Anyway, “When my girlfriend lost the weight” is a really, really good story. You can find Matt here. http://gettydrafts.blogspot.com/. Check him out. He also has music and videos. He’s a writer to watch. I’ve never met him but I have emailed him a few times. One day, I will like the fact that one of my stories shows up next to one of his. In the meantime, I’ll be looking for a contact high.
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