For a change of pace, here’s a poem dedicated to the inconsequential in your peripheral vision that still manages to take you out of yourself if only for a moment

Urban Moment

Lonely square, you are out of place

In this vast plane of concrete sidewalk

Deliberately cut, as if for the planting of a tiny bush

In-filled with weeds of tiny broadleaf

You curve the strides of human giants

Who hustle past you, thick Bonzai jungle

As you would appear to an insect or an ant

Break this stride from hotel

To skyward tower of corporate strength

Disrupt this pedestrian’s gait

Intrude on this mind

Consumed with the importance of the day

As a mirror might force a pause

For a look, not at what will be seen by others

Or to check a statement of fashion

But a glimpse into a state of mind

To see hurt where others see happy

To see failure when colleagues see competence

To see ugly when lovers see beauty

As things could or couldn’t be, as they should be, as they want to be

If for only a moment

Plush carpet of green

Of perfect form from the avian view

Like the statuesque order that is Manhattan from the sky

Lonely piece of precise geometry

Tiny emblem on the urban surface

A dash of reflection carved from the day

Lovely square

A brush with the lushness of life

Jason Makansi, October 2009

 

2 Responses to Urban Moment

  1. lenaboo3 says:

    I like it. What exactly are you talking about though? What inconsequential thing has so captured your attention? Also did the pasting into your blog take away the stanzas, because I generally like stanzas in a longer poem like this one. I love the whole section about the mirror, it’s really wonderful. But how does the mirror connect to what you’re looking at?

  2. I was walking from a hotel to a meeting in Boston’s Cambridge area and this square was cut out of the sidewalk right in the middle. Even though it only had these tiny weeds growing in it, all the pedestrians were walking around it (and it was a crowded sidewalk at that hour). I mean, you see those cut out squares along the curb for planting trees or bushes but not in the middle of the sidewalk! As for the mirror, this “square” made me pause the way you might pause passing a mirror and “check yourself out.”

    As for the stanzas, that’s because I don’t know how to type into this box and keep the line breaks.

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